macos dynamic desktop 翻译校对完毕 #16
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| select "Go > Go to Folder..." (<kbd>⇧</kbd><kbd>⌘</kbd><kbd>G</kbd>), | ||
| and enter "/Library/Desktop Pictures/". | ||
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| 在 macOS Mojave 系统下，打开 Finder（访达），选择“Go（前往）> Go to Folder...（前往文件夹...）” （<kbd>⇧</kbd><kbd>⌘</kbd><kbd>G</kbd>），输入“/Library/Desktop Pictures/”。 |
| [complicated](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Position_of_the_Sun) | ||
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| 可喜的是，天文学家能告诉你 —— 而且相当准确 —— 太阳在天空中的位置或时间。不可贺的是，这其中的计算十分[复杂](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Position_of_the_Sun)。 |
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不可贺的是 --》 这个说法有点奇怪, 改成 “遗憾的是” 可好?
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@saitjr 能否根据 review 再改善一下？ |
| which helped to reduce eye strain | ||
| from hacking late into the night (or early in the morning, as it were). | ||
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| 过去几年，和这个特性旗鼓相当的要数 Night Shift（夜览），它主要是在日夜更替的时候减少对眼睛的劳损。 |
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“它主要是在日夜更替的时候减少对眼睛的劳损。” 后半句感觉有点问题，“主要”在原句中没有体现，“hacking late into the night” 也没有翻译出来
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hacking late into the night (or early in the morning, as it were) 感觉就是翻译的日夜更替。
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| it makes for a lovely visual effect when switching dark mode on and off) | ||
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| 效果不仅微妙，而且让人愉悦。桌面仿佛被赋予了生命，能随着时间的推移而变化；符合自然规律。（不出意外的话，结合 dark mode 的切换，还会有讨喜的特效） |
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开头没有主语，不是汉语的表达习惯，可以用考虑加上主语
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| it makes for a lovely visual effect when switching dark mode on and off) | ||
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| 效果不仅微妙，而且让人愉悦。桌面仿佛被赋予了生命，能随着时间的推移而变化；符合自然规律。（不出意外的话，结合 dark mode 的切换，还会有讨喜的特效） |
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"不出意外的话" 这个翻译不准确，原句想表达的是，结合 dark mode 切换的视觉效果，也是 dynamic desktop 的一个加小效果，或者加分项，类似的意思。
| a little bit of reverse-engineering | ||
| and even some spherical trigonometry. | ||
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| 答案会深入探究图片格式，同时涉及一些逆向工程以及球面三角学相关的内容。 |
| The first step to understanding how Dynamic Desktop works | ||
| is to get hold of a dynamic image. | ||
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| 理解 Dynamic Desktop 第一步，就是要找到这些动态图片。 |
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how Dynamic Desktop works， 没有翻译出来
| If we click on the next panel over, "More Info Inspector", | ||
| we don't learn a whole lot more about our subject: | ||
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| 不幸的是，这些就是预览所展示的全部信息了（截至发稿前）。即使点击旁边的“More Info Inspector（更多信息检查器）”，我们也只是能得到下面这个表格，其余的无从得知： |
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“其余的无从得知” 有些过度翻译了，原句语气没有这么重
| which helped to reduce eye strain | ||
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| 过去几年，和这个特性旗鼓相当的要数 Night Shift（夜览），它主要是在日夜更替的时候减少对眼睛的劳损。 |
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hacking late into the night (or early in the morning, as it were) 感觉就是翻译的日夜更替。
macos dynamic desktop 翻译校对完毕
麻烦各位再校对一下，谢谢