Optimal Sizing: 50% draft #90
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has the paper been edited/gone through the writing checklist? do you want us to look at the paper or the code? |
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The paper, don't worry about the latex code. |
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Thanks @samgdotson . |
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@samgdotson I emailed you my edit for the paper. |
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| the life cycle carbon emissions of a nuclear power plant is rivaled only by on- | ||
| shore wind power, shown in Figure \ref{fig:co2sources} and is capable of | ||
| Nuclear energy was conspicuously absent from the Master Plan's analysis. | ||
| The life cycle carbon emissions of a nuclear power plant is rivaled only by on- |
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'is rivaled only' is passive voice.
Can you use active voice?
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| producing the high temperature steam required for district heating at | ||
| \gls{uiuc} \cite{allen_framing_2018}. These two facts alone make nuclear power | ||
| an ideal candidate for replacing the coal and natural gas boilers in the campus | ||
| power plant. Additionally, criticisms about nuclear's lack of profitability | ||
| would not apply to nuclear power at \gls{uiuc} because the campus operates a | ||
| micro-grid and is thus uninfluenced by the deregulated energy market in | ||
| micro-grid and is thus insulated from the deregulated energy market in |
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'is insulated from' is passive voice
Can you use active voice?
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Closes #89 by adding a 50% draft for the Optimal Sizing paper.
A built version of it is contained in
main.pdf.