concision for review purposes

dup of cooljeanius/A_New_Order@122f76b
nemaara · Oct 6, 2021 · d8d2616 · d8d2616
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diff --git a/macros/ano-20macros.cfg b/macros/ano-20macros.cfg
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@
 
     [event]
         {KILLEDBY (Uri van Roe) (Reme Carrenemoe)}
-        {MSGm_Reme _"I always was suspicious of you, Uri, even before you betrayed us... time for you to face God's punishment for your betrayal."}
+        {MSGm_Reme _"I always was suspicious of you, Uri, even before you betrayed us... time for you to face God's punishment."}
     [/event]
 
     [event]

diff --git a/scenarios/12_Leaving_Raedwood.cfg b/scenarios/12_Leaving_Raedwood.cfg
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ Move Ruvio to signpost to ask him for advice."}
             # (no animation here, because it's ok to leave it ambiguous whether he died or just left here)
         [/kill]
         {MSGW_Ruvio _"Well, is your curiosity satisfied?"}
-        {MSGW_Gawen _"(<i>sigh</i>) Fine, I guess..."}
+        {MSGW_Gawen _"I guess..."}
     [/event]
 
     [event]
@@ -311,9 +311,9 @@ Move Ruvio to signpost to ask him for advice."}
             id=Quivre O Raedbor
             animate=yes
         [/kill]
-        {MSGW_Gawen _"You just let him die? Why?"}
-        {MSGW_Ruvio _"As I said, it didn't seem as if he'd have anything important to say."}
-        {MSGW_Gawen _"Well, if you say so..."}
+        {MSGW_Gawen _"You just let him die?"}
+        {MSGW_Ruvio _"It seemed like he didn't have anything important to say."}
+        {MSGW_Gawen _"If you say so."}
     [/event]
 
     [event]

diff --git a/scenarios/14e_Saorduc_Swamps.cfg b/scenarios/14e_Saorduc_Swamps.cfg
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     {ELSE}
     # TODO: test display of these messages:
     {MESSAGE ({LIZ}) () ({LIZ}) _"We are more than jusssst training fodder for your army!"}
-    {MSGW_Gawen _"I'm sorry, but that's just the way things go."}
+    {MSGW_Gawen _"I'm sorry, but that's the way it is."}
     {MSGW_Lorin _"Don't apologize to these filthy lizards, Gawen."}
     {END_IF}
     {CLEAR_VARIABLE liz_gold_amt}