Change wording for better clarity

closes #48

story/ep6/en/umi6_12.txt

@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@
 `Beato thought back on the books she had read in {f:5:Featherine}'s archives, in which the old her and Battler had fought.`
 ` ......That must have been fun as well.`
 `During a short break in the family conference, a horrible, brutal mass murder had occurred...`
-`Excluding Battler, the six people killed had all been women......`
+`The six people killed, excluding Battler, had all been women......`
 `The men who had been left behind went mad with rage at the cowardice of it, broke down sobbing at the sadness of losing their wives, ......and went back and forth between the two many times......`
 `"Why were they all girls......?`
 ` How cowardly can a person be...?"`
@@ -827,4 +827,4 @@
 `......What she was saying made sense, and it sounded as though she was calmly smoking out the most suspicious people at this point in time.`
 `With her accomplished conversation techniques, Erika was skillfully grasping the initiative.`
 ` ......Even without the presence of the detective's authority, controlling human nature like this is trivial.`
-` Your thoughts, ladies and gentlemen......?`
+` Your thoughts, ladies and gentlemen......?`